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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Singapore
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Hi all,
First timer here. No DSLR yet, planning to get one later this year. Photo taken in Japan earlier this year with Sony DSC H5, can't remember setting, I think with auto mode. Photo taken at about 7am. Image was slightly edited with PS trial version. Seeking advice regarding composition and photo editing skill. Thanks [IMG] [/IMG] |
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Singapore
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Gorgeous!! I like the composition.... cool =)
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: Singapore....
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nice blue...cool blue
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Join Date: Jun 2008
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simply beautiful nice shot
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Bukit Timah
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Is it a little overexposed?
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Join Date: Jul 2007
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i dont think so. its looks good
the best thing that many photographers forget is the timing, and 7am is probably excellent. thats something crucial in getting a nice picture |
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Northerner
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Hi jiayeong
Nice take on Mount Fuji I find that there is abit of overexposure at the tip. Not too sure if it could be attributed to post procesing. Perhaps you can try shoot raw and work from there. Else a GND might be able to get abit more details from the peak, and pulling more details from the shadow areas as well. Ryan |
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New Member
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Singapore
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Thanks for the encouraging remarks, guys!!
![]() "GND might be able to get a bit more details from the peak, and pulling more details from the shadow areas as well." Thanks for the tips Ryan, noted the dark areas (around the trees) but I just do not know how to brighten that part up without spoiling the rest of the pic. Will need to brush up my post-processing skill. Yup, I agree with u, a graduated filter might be good to reduced the over exposed area. Will try to adjust the over-exposed part with software again tonight. Thanks a lot, JiaYeong Last edited by jiayeong; 3rd September 2008 at 04:43 PM. Reason: typo |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Singapore
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"a little pull down in the brighter area would be good, and i think there is a little tilt, last but not least, can try doing a panorama crop"
Oopps, ya slightly tilted.....didn't notice it earlier. Regarding panaroma crop, I am afraid the mountain's reflection in the lake will be affected if I do that. |
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Join Date: Apr 2007
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we look at the pic upside down ,you try it looks better .
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Brunei
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That's a nice serene landscape you've captured there. Only thing to me is that a more symmetrical composition between the mountain and its reflection might be more suitable as mentioned already.
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: behind the viewfinder
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Nice photo of mount fuji.
btw, you can find many freewares around that can show you the EXIF data of photos (if you do not have any). It'll help to show you the settings you used. Just google it ![]() |
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Join Date: Apr 2002
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Was this taken at the Hakone area? The clouds obscured the mountain completely the time I was there... : (
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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Thanks guys, for all the comments and new ideas posted here, appreciate all your inputs. JiaYeong |
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Lucky u. When I was there, lousy weather, can't see the ice cap.
After that I went up 5th station, largi worst, can't even find my coach, visibility was like 5m. |
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