My Love Charm

velasco · 31st August 2008

After a long exile from the critique corner, i want your input on this piece of photo.
I just wanna know if any impact or emotions were evoked from the picture?
I fear the photo is not strong enough to stand on its own. I dont know.. i want it to look like a humourus-candid-mysterious piece? haha

What's mine is yours,
What's yours is mine,
Let our powers cross the line,
I offer up this gift to share,
Switch our powers through the air
Love-in-mist be the flower,
ignite the teddy's power.

kruger · 31st August 2008

Your write up seems a bit confusing. You said "I fear the photo is not strong enough to stand on its own." so the enhancement was the little poem? Mysterious? Probably due the to the smoke. The bear does look funny and cute, perhaps a round container may give it a better feel than the rectangular takeaway container.

night86mare · 3rd September 2008

i'm going to say that i like this a lot.

i'm not sure what sort of emotion you want to evoke, but somehow i'm thinking of horror movies here, and greenish tones might work better for this picture if that is your intention.

velasco · 3rd September 2008

lol. thats quite surprising. thanks anywho. i think its a turn off that i used those el cheapo reusable container. until i redo this shot with a more appealing set up, i'll lock this up. paiseh! hahahha

31st August 2008	#1
velasco Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: PARISris , Singapore Posts: 2,266	My Love Charm After a long exile from the critique corner, i want your input on this piece of photo. I just wanna know if any impact or emotions were evoked from the picture? I fear the photo is not strong enough to stand on its own. I dont know.. i want it to look like a humourus-candid-mysterious piece? haha What's mine is yours, What's yours is mine, Let our powers cross the line, I offer up this gift to share, Switch our powers through the air Love-in-mist be the flower, ignite the teddy's power. __________________ 01.02. -on the verge of losing my sanity.

31st August 2008	#2
kruger Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Tampines Posts: 894	Re: My Love Charm Your write up seems a bit confusing. You said "I fear the photo is not strong enough to stand on its own." so the enhancement was the little poem? Mysterious? Probably due the to the smoke. The bear does look funny and cute, perhaps a round container may give it a better feel than the rectangular takeaway container.

3rd September 2008	#3
night86mare Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in your mind Posts: 19,262	Re: My Love Charm i'm going to say that i like this a lot. i'm not sure what sort of emotion you want to evoke, but somehow i'm thinking of horror movies here, and greenish tones might work better for this picture if that is your intention. __________________ Gallery \| Dreamscapes 09 Pentaxian 伪君子之所以更可憎

3rd September 2008	#4
velasco Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: PARISris , Singapore Posts: 2,266	Re: My Love Charm lol. thats quite surprising. thanks anywho. i think its a turn off that i used those el cheapo reusable container. until i redo this shot with a more appealing set up, i'll lock this up. paiseh! hahahha __________________ 01.02. -on the verge of losing my sanity.