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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Singapore
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My 1st post here. a picture of my tired son being carried by my wife after a walk. this was taken last wednesday after the rain, so it was cloudy. his eyes look tired so thats the focus of this photo. converted it to B/W to go with the mood. i would greatly appreciate comments on how the picture was taken, processed or on any aspect of photography that would help me to improve my photo skills and technique. Thanks in advance
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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he doesnt look tired at all.
nevertheless he's a cute boy. |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: serangoon
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technically sir, you're in no position to conclude whether he looks tired or not unless you're the parents of the child.
because parents definetly know thier children well enough to know whether he or she is tired. to TS: maybe you could use a smaller aperture in your future shots for your boy. with that his whole face will be in focus.
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: in your mind
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dada677 - the framing is a tad lack lustre, the light is flat. perhaps wait for better light, and be more careful with composition? i.e. it is usually preferable to get the face in entirety.. you can choose not to, but it must work. that isn't the case here though. |
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Join Date: Feb 2006
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will be more lively if there is catchlight in the eyes.
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Singapore
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... i appreciate the tips you have given, the catchlight is a great idea! will be trying them next time... Thanks again! |
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