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Old 20th August 2008   #1
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Took this picture while out on orientation run with Mo2...

Taken with EOS400D, at 1/40sec, using 50mm prime lens and ASA800...

She is one of the bridesmaid and this was taken while at an awkward angle as the bride's room is really cramped...was going out of the room when I see her leaning close to the mirror and quickly snapped the shot....

Is the composition ok? Or maybe more light be needed? No Flash available that day tho...

Your C&C welcomed....

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Old 20th August 2008   #2
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Yeh wise not to use flash while MUA/gal is doing makeup, don't want them to poke their eyes out.
I'd say pic is blurry, composition doesn't appeal much esp the right eye is so blurry (handshake?)
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Old 20th August 2008   #3
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thanks...could be handshake..only had the camera for 1week then...oh and its before we were hurried out for the bride to change..lol
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thanks...could be handshake..only had the camera for 1week then...oh and its before we were hurried out for the bride to change..lol
Sad to say that is not a strong enough reason to explain hand shake Other than that, you said the subject is one of the bridemaids, however, i see no wedding hint in the picture, and after going through the pic a few times i still do not get what your pic is getting to. Sad to say it looks like just a normal evening out thing, with the subject applying the necessary make up.
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lols. this looks spooky. esp with the dim look.
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