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Join Date: May 2008
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![]() I walked pass this elderly couple and 5 mins later i realised that i dont really see this often. Managed to find them after awhile and i took this shot. Who says love isn't forever. How do your guys think of the picture? Composition and Tone alright?
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was there a reason why you cropped it to the dimension it is? since there is enough space in the picture perhaps you could have just cropped it in a shape of a square.
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thanks for the feedback!
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A good capture, though slightly soft. Pity you didn't capture the facial expressions.
I just feel the other people on the right of frame are a distraction as they are not sufficiently out of focus. I can still clearly make out the facial features of the backpack-toting young man for instance. But, on the whole, good work. |
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Personally, for me, has it been shot in a cloudy day, or PP? Darkened tones dont go well with the theme, iMHO.
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It was extremely cloudy. Taken this morning in Chinatown, just nice Before and After heavy rain. After i left the place rain again.
But anyway, i didnt try to brighten up just a little in pp cause trying to show old age by leaving it at a darkened tone. Thanks calebk and cheguthamrin
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Don't sugarcoat when it is not. ![]() |
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