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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Punggol
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![]() My dad's BMW 520i... Older than me! I tried cropping it with a panoramic-ish crop to not reveal my dad's number plate for private reasons, and to remove distractions in the background. I also wanted to express the simplicity of the design (2 circles, 2 square vents, 2 circles) and also showcase the smooth metallic reflections. B&W processed to make things simpler (regarding the left and right background). Any productive criticisms are welcomed =)
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Nice car!
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Somehow I find the crop a little too long/wide. Perhaps you may want to leave everything in b/w except the logo...
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Hey, please read this.
------ Bro, I am also a little uncomfortable with the way too elongated crop. Is there a reason you'd leave the windshield out? I'm sure there are other ways to compose this short of a really long crop. I'm not seeing the metallic reflections either... |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
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looks like a real well maintained car.
hmm i used to love cropping pics to the weird dimensions that suit my liking. but i was thinking.. what if i wanna print that photo? yea so... what if you wanna print out this pic? i guess showing the front lower bumper and windscreen would be nice
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True, maybe pano crops don't exactly do that well for symmetrical things.
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Perhaps you could have taken at such an angle, about 45-60 deg from the top front end, getting the lights and the frontal part - such that you wont get the bumper, but you wont get the windscreen either - if you get my drift... taking this frontal shot without the windscreen dont make the car look complete.
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