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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Sweet Spot, Singapore
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Shot this near Aljunied. Lifted my head and saw the cross along with the blue sky and attempted this shot.
![]() I hope to bring out the fact that to some people, their religion is their everything and when they look up, they don't just see the sky but something more meaningful. C&C welcomed ![]() |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: serangoon
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nice.
the ratio of your picture frame is 7:5 yea? try cropping it to 3:2. it may look better ![]() EDIT: oh oh oh. and try to straighten the cross. hahaha
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: North-side!
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its better for the cross to be tilted for me. personal taste i guess. and yeah may seems better if you cro it 3:2. overall
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Sweet Spot, Singapore
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![]() Thanks both bros for the kind comments ![]() |
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Clementi
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The text...it is a bit hard to derive the link between the text and the image, considering there is no distinctive divide of light and darkness. I personally find the divide between a white cloud and blue sky not nearly enough to translate as light and darkness. |
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