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15th August 2008
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portrait at the railway.
took this with my mamiya c330 with a 80mm f2.8 lens.i would like to know how i could improve on the framing as i would like to do better portrait kind of shots.thanks!
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Re: portrait at the railway.
try a BG of green or the tracks (since you mention you're there) |
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15th August 2008
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Re: portrait at the railway.
hmm picture is generally underexposed. yea since you mentioned railway tracks.. you should include it in your pic
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16th August 2008
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Re: portrait at the railway.
It's a portrait on the railway, but where is the railway?
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17th August 2008
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Re: portrait at the railway.
blown out highlights, bad moment, bad positioning of model, etc etc etc. of all the places you could place him, you placed him against a mess of range of tones, so you get blown highlights and shadow areas in the same shot. what happens is a very distracting background, no one looks at the model and everyone looks at the background. which can be a good thing actually, since your model is in a horrible pose here that doesn't flatter him, and doesn't say anything about him. |
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Re: portrait at the railway.
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