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Old 15th August 2008   #1
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Default Happy Feet

Hello everyone. Kinda new here.

Hope to get some comments from u guys here.

While waiting for my friend, i saw this cute little girl walking in the water, or pool u may call it. well its a hot day so her feet should be quite happy.

Feel free to comment about anything.


Picture taken with a Canon Powershot A720IS
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Old 17th August 2008   #2
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Try a lower angle. Always move around and avoid shooting from your height unless it is the obvious best!
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Old 17th August 2008   #3
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hmmm.
if you have captured her expression, it will show tell a whole new story.
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Old 17th August 2008   #4
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Your photo has too much distraction on your "happy feet" as a main subject.... I agree on capturing her happy expression to complement with her happy feet...
nice try though...
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Old 18th August 2008   #5
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Default Re: Happy Feet

Take aways from this picture -
1- get lower to get a zoomed shot of the feet, w/o the distractions
2- getting her facial expressions to show happiness would enhance the title
3- crop if necessary
4- commen constructively, to provide learning benefits for all
5- filter / ignore non-constructive comments
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Old 18th August 2008   #6
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A little too far I feel
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Old 18th August 2008   #7
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Thank you guys for all the comments.. point noted..
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Old 24th August 2008   #8
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Default Re: Happy Feet

yes, either zoom in on her lower body or something lower than that of a bird's eye view from behind her (capturing the girl herself and the murky water . but the latter would prove to be a real challenge though. ha! oh and BG's way too distracting.
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