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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Out of the world
Posts: 268
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Hello everyone. Kinda new here.
Hope to get some comments from u guys here. While waiting for my friend, i saw this cute little girl walking in the water, or pool u may call it. well its a hot day so her feet should be quite happy. ![]() Feel free to comment about anything. ![]() Picture taken with a Canon Powershot A720IS |
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Jurong West
Posts: 880
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Try a lower angle. Always move around and avoid shooting from your height unless it is the obvious best!
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Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 820
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hmmm.
if you have captured her expression, it will show tell a whole new story. |
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Woodlands
Posts: 1,121
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Your photo has too much distraction on your "happy feet" as a main subject.... I agree on capturing her happy expression to complement with her happy feet...
nice try though...
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: 600060
Posts: 1,267
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Take aways from this picture -
1- get lower to get a zoomed shot of the feet, w/o the distractions 2- getting her facial expressions to show happiness would enhance the title 3- crop if necessary 4- commen constructively, to provide learning benefits for all 5- filter / ignore non-constructive comments
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 138
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A little too far I feel
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Out of the world
Posts: 268
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Thank you guys for all the comments.. point noted..
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 202
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yes, either zoom in on her lower body or something lower than that of a bird's eye view from behind her (capturing the girl herself and the murky water . but the latter would prove to be a real challenge though. ha! oh and BG's way too distracting.
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