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    Hi! This was taken from Mandai Zoo last weekend.

    I would like to seek your comments after seeing it


    Thank you very much.
    Cheers,

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    Default Re: see you through my eyes

    You may want to take a look at this guide on how to do a proper write up when seeking critique.

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    Thank calebk for your reminder.

    just a short wirte up to this picture - orang utan

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?

    I will like feedback on the composition.
    zoom in to capture its face expression and especially its eyes is my focus.

    2.what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    I want viewers to share the same feeling through this picture.
    From its expression, it seem to be sad if you agree with me.

    3.what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    Personally, I like this picture because it really capture the mood of orange utan through its eyes and face expression.


    Thank you for your comments.

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    i like the idea, but i think this would work better:

    a) as a portrait composition, simply because i do not need to see the hair by the sides
    b) slightly tighter
    c) with greater depth of field, else the oof jaw is quite a painful distraction

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    Thank night86mare for your comments.

    here's Photo Properties
    Camera: Olympus E-300
    Shutter: 1/20 sec
    Aperature: f/4.9
    ISO: 100
    Focal Length: 283.0 mm
    Tripod without flash

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