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Old 10th August 2008   #1
kisim
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Default Peek-A-Boo

Hi all,

I was in the bedroom with my camera.
suddenly, my pointer "stand up" to look for me...

I would like to hear your feedback regarding:
(1) Exposure
(2) Composition
(3) How to improve

Thank you very much

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Old 10th August 2008   #2
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Default Re: Peek-A-Boo

I see you followed the rules of the third which is good but the dog is really too OOF. Most likely due to subject movement. Watch your shutterspeed next time.
Personally, I would crop out the black areas at the bottom and convert to B/W.
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Old 16th August 2008   #3
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Default Re: Peek-A-Boo

Originally Posted by kisim View Post
Hi all,

I was in the bedroom with my camera.
suddenly, my pointer "stand up" to look for me...

I would like to hear your feedback regarding:
(1) Exposure
(2) Composition
(3) How to improve

Thank you very much

it seems that this picture requires a tighter crop
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