Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: eye patch

  1. #1

    Default eye patch



    Trying to get it too look like an advert. Something seems off other than the background of course lol.
    Last edited by eleveninth; 26th July 2008 at 11:09 PM.

  2. #2
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    Serangoon North
    Posts
    2,225

    Default Re: eye patch

    Do watch out for these:
    Highlights is blown.
    The background and the reflections on the sunglasses is distracting.
    Is that a tie on the shoulder?

  3. #3

    Default Re: eye patch

    Ok! will take note, but what exactly do you mean by highlights. And yea that is a tie. lol

  4. #4

    Default Re: eye patch

    Quote Originally Posted by eleveninth View Post


    Trying to get it too look like an advert. Something seems off other than the background of course lol.
    pls provide a write up for your pic. what is it that the ad is trying to sell? the product focus is way too weak. u need remove the distractions and emphasis more on your product.

  5. #5
    Member
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Location
    East Coast
    Posts
    66

    Default Re: eye patch

    Ah... but the product is the eyewear... that's why he named it "eyepatch", eh?

    Aside from the background, the face is a bit overexposed, the crumpled palm and what's that reflection? Was that you in shorts? I'd enlarge somewhat your ad text too.

    I like the composition and the expression in the lady's face. Just some more work here and you're well on your way.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •