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    Default Taking still life first attempt



    Toy is one i newly bought today for practice purpose. requires me to paint..but haben.

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    Default Re: Taking still life first attempt

    First, the picture looks tilted.

    Second, there's a chair like subject in the foreground, rather distracting.

    Third, I could see you're trying to frame your pic but there's spaces on the left, right and bottom which are rather distracting.

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    Default Re: Taking still life first attempt

    Quote Originally Posted by kruger View Post
    First, the picture looks tilted.

    Second, there's a chair like subject in the foreground, rather distracting.

    Third, I could see you're trying to frame your pic but there's spaces on the left, right and bottom which are rather distracting.

    actually the original thing itself is tilted. u mean to tilt my cam so that it is not tilted ah?

    there is a chair like kind of thing..is suppose to look s if from a door frame

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