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    Default Exit stage right...

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    Default Re: Exit stage right...

    maybe a person standing at the exit door might make the photo better.....

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    Default Re: Exit stage right...

    awesome shot, yeah that missing person would be so cool
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    I don't see a stage; I only see the exit. Good use of leading lines but it doesn't portray the title. Nitpicking, you might wanna correct the verticals - the image is slightly slanted right.

    What is the purpose of the shot? What is its intended message. You're required to do a short write up that includes the above-said questions.

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    Default Re: Exit stage right...

    Sorry the title should be "Exit turn Right"... Its taken from the bottom of the HDB. Shooting up... And the photo turn out quite ok... Its look light an entrance or exit of the tunnel...

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    Default Re: Exit stage right...

    Quote Originally Posted by excelglsi View Post
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    Sorry but I don't get it

    Who is exitin to the right ?

    Interesting shot if exposure was a little better controlled, but it does not work for the title.

    "Exit to the right" might be better
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    add 2 words to the white part. you will get instant different results. "ORD LOH!"
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    Quote Originally Posted by excelglsi View Post
    Sorry the title should be "Exit turn Right"... Its taken from the bottom of the HDB. Shooting up... And the photo turn out quite ok... Its look light an entrance or exit of the tunnel...

    CnC welcome
    after you have explained, i finally understood the photo. the photo has an interesting perspective. i thought it was actually horizontal tunnel at first.

    however, there are issues. firstly, i cannot see any point in the photo. secondly, there are underexposure and overexposure.

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    Default Re: Exit stage right...

    Quote Originally Posted by excelglsi View Post
    Shots this with a Fz10... CnC welcome...

    you're an old member and you disregard the rules of this section... i'm closing this.
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