Adrian&Shujun2008

[cyngeiw]

Yay, my 5th wedding shoot. Planned to just shoot for fun, ended up being the 2nd photographer for day shots as the official one came late, MIA ocasionally, etc. Ermm, anyway, hope i have improved man(which i do think so...hehe). C&C are welcome. Hopefully these photos are worth to comment yah...thanks in advance.

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[cyngeiw]

果然 no one commenting man....nvm...i take it as my photos have no prob then. (and not good enough too)

thx guys....

[ssping83]

i think post processing consistency is quite important for wedding shoots.. that was the first "irk" i got when i scrolled through the pics..

a few other general comments:

- i see that you used wideangles for some shots (#15 and #16).. or at least so i think.. i think they are not very appropriate coz it made the scale of things very "strange" to the eye.. and the supposed "subject" becomes lost into the picture..

- some pics have very awkward cropping.. noticably one is #11..

[theroo]

Originally Posted by cyngeiw 果然 no one commenting man....nvm...i take it as my photos have no prob then. (and not good enough too) thx guys....

lol, dont take it so personally man, anyway since you are crying i'll comment on it.

1. why desaturate something that is so obviously meant to be bright and saturated (oranges and reds)...? i wld've thought it'd look nicer brighter.

5&6. talk to the bride and get her in a nicer position. she seems a bit slouchy and it'd be nicer if you posed her better.

7&8. bit concerned on the 'what's going on' concept here. because i know what you're trying to do, but try to get something happening in the photo. both photos seem to be very snappy. for 7, nothing is happening, just the guys standing there. for 8, the girls, well, one is smiling, the others are not really doing anything either...

9&10 are the opposite, these are nice, they have a moment there and they're good to look at

11-15 are good. except, for 13... er... what's the message?

same with 17 - it seems an odd shot.

16 is good, but the perspective seems warped. might've looked better ground up.

all in all, i would also say that you might want to look at the colours. you probably wanted the desaturated effect, but it makes everything look slightly yellowish.

keep it up though, there are some good shots and concepts here

[cyngeiw]

to ssping83: yeah....thx for the comment...it def helps...

always tot tat i shld have some variety in PP...u noe, to have diff kinda feel for the photos...now then i noe i shld be consistent with it...

as for the cropping...will take care o it next time...

to theroo: wow bro, i terima kasih 1000 times man...ur detailed comments have rally helped...thx a million...

i must admit that most photos are q snappy....still learning how to pose the model...will keep it up then...

as for my PP....still a noob man, so trying a diff feel here...next time will try on high key maybe...hehe///