The Blissful Journey of Calvin & Michelle- by Tsen Ho

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Hi, heres my 2nd wedding assignment for my bro.
Hope to have some C&C from u guys. Pls help me improve!

Slideshow:http://feetless.webng.com/calvin_michelle/

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this pose is Kelvin inspired. http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showt...219357&page=21
haha. however, i think i failed. cant really seem to get
the sharp effect.
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thanks for viewing! remember to give me some suggestion or advice
on how i can improve myself!

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re number 6. if i have this right, i think i know what you're trying to do... focus on the bubbles with the couple blur in the bground? doesnt seem to work so well in your case mainly becauase the couple are still fairly recognisable and 'in focus' enough such that people may be confused as to whether you were trying to actually focus on the couple but got a bad shot, when in actuality, you are trying to focus on the bubbles... ?

either way the confusion might be worth considering in the future, i guess it's a matter of 'if you're going to do it, go all the way' and get the couple really OOF so that it's obvious the bubbles are the subject.

for number 5. yeah, not really sharp at all and i think your angle of view should be wider...

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Originally Posted by theroo re number 6. if i have this right, i think i know what you're trying to do... focus on the bubbles with the couple blur in the bground? doesnt seem to work so well in your case mainly becauase the couple are still fairly recognisable and 'in focus' enough such that people may be confused as to whether you were trying to actually focus on the couple but got a bad shot, when in actuality, you are trying to focus on the bubbles... ? either way the confusion might be worth considering in the future, i guess it's a matter of 'if you're going to do it, go all the way' and get the couple really OOF so that it's obvious the bubbles are the subject. for number 5. yeah, not really sharp at all and i think your angle of view should be wider...

hey,realli thanks for your suggestions! haha. yeah, #6, was trying to focus on the bubbles. but failed. i get what u mean.
hmmm, but i think i should use a f1.8 lens to achieve what u suggested.
for #5, ahhhhh, wide angle. thats something i'd been pondering this few weeks. maybe its time to bbb!
or maybe renting one wide angle lens to try out is a better idea.