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    Default Marina



    Exposure: 0.033 sec (1/30)
    Aperture: f/9
    Focal Length: 34 mm
    ISO Speed: 100
    Exposure Bias: 0/6 EV

    This was taken at the boatasia 2008,
    any comments about composition, lighting, etc?
    Experimental + Newbie photographer
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/van88/

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    Default Re: Marina

    my 2 cents worth.hope u dun mind.

    the picture lacks a strong subject to me. its too cluttered with too many things for the viewer to look at. the details of some of the stuff are lost after the B&W conversion.

    to me, because u took away the color, the other parts of the picture has to be even stronger like texture, details, etc.

    is there anything in particular u were trying to show in the pic?

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    Default Re: Marina

    Overly cluttered, no point of interest, no subject. No complete yatch to see, only see numbers to buy 4D. TS, you named this thread marina, honestly i only see a part of the yatch in frame floating on the water. There is no hint of the marina in the pic at all. And i assume that boatasia 2008 is a grand event. There should be more interesting subjects around. Correct me if i'm wrong on this.
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    Default Re: Marina

    black and white pictures should be stronger...

    your picture mostly is black and grey, not black and white... too much grey liao, no WHITE ! We are also not seeing good tone here.

    don't be dis-courage by all the words here, keep shooting

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    Default Re: Marina

    Thanks guys for the critique ...Now I can go work on improving my skills
    Experimental + Newbie photographer
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/van88/

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