Sleeping peacefully

[kazeeee]

I was in some event and captured this baby sleeping.
Any comment ? Thanks

Btw, this was shot at 1/250 @ f/4.5

[HTCahHTC]

just my two cents worth. i think a tighter crop will help, as the right side of the photo is too empty.

[sprintist]

this picture might work better with central composition and maybe a slight tilt or without. the use of negative space didnt work, created more tension on the left and nothing to balance on the right. i like the gentle bw tones, its great and well capture too.

[kazeeee]

thanks for the comment

[calebk]

Originally Posted by HTCahHTC just my two cents worth. i think a tighter crop will help, as the right side of the photo is too empty.

Originally Posted by sprintist this picture might work better with central composition and maybe a slight tilt or without. the use of negative space didnt work, created more tension on the left and nothing to balance on the right. i like the gentle bw tones, its great and well capture too.

I would go with sprintist's suggestion for a center framing rather than usage of negative space on the right. The rule of thirds doesn't apply all the time either

A tighter crop may be potentially uncomfortable because as it is, the baby's head is already cut off; it's not complete, so an even tighter crop may not be the best idea.