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20th May 2008
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My shots for your critique
My novice shots -
 Balconies of Sentosa Deleted the other 2 pics .. my apologies and thanks to teerax for the reminder  Last edited by flightspeed; 20th May 2008 at 01:42 PM. |
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Re: My shots for your critique
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Re: My shots for your critique
not bad. well seen. well composed. but technically soft: selection of focus point and f#; but technical stuff easily learnt, eg via experimenting.
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20th May 2008
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Re: My shots for your critique
nice patterns and lines... leading to the sunbathing woman at the top left corner.. woo hoo... haha
 yeah abit soft though is it taken on a hot day?
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Re: My shots for your critique
yes i agree too soft too ... taken at abt 11am in the morning .. didnt have a dslr so taken with my compact - Ricoh R7
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20th May 2008
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Re: My shots for your critique
this one works for me as well.. i love the pattern created by the balconies and leading it through the sunbather...
except that this photo is a tad soft... this photo can be more punchier by increasing the contrast a bit... nice shot bro...
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Re: My shots for your critique
thanks for all ur critiques ... how to increase contrast ? i dont have photoshop software .. this picture straight from camera
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20th May 2008
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Re: My shots for your critique
You could lose the red towel at the bottom left.
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20th May 2008
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Re: My shots for your critique
nice compose!
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20th May 2008
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Re: My shots for your critique
this shot is cool. but is it overexposed, or is it just soft (like what others have said)?
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