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Old 20th May 2008   #1
repulsivity
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Default my super cute nephew

photo taken during my nephew's 1 month old baby shower.

c&c is included, esp on the composition
also. do you think its too tight?
is the shadow on the left distracting?

i didn't use any flash, just natural sun light.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3045/...5f2684e402.jpg

thank all. =D


*sorry i didn't follow up on my other one. so im thanking all those who voiced out their opinions. +D

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Old 20th May 2008   #2
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Default Re: my super cute nephew

link the photo for you.

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Old 20th May 2008   #3
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Default Re: my super cute nephew

Hm...it looks underexposed and I feel that it is tight. I think you can go for a looser framing so as not to cut off the top of his head.
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Old 20th May 2008   #4
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Default Re: my super cute nephew

to me,

expressionless
underexposed
background is even more distracting than the shadow
cropping nor here nor there.
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Old 20th May 2008   #5
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Default Re: my super cute nephew

too dark .. u using too high an f# ... open up maybe f2.8 ... also colour balance ... do a custom WB
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