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Old 18th May 2008   #1
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Old 18th May 2008   #2
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I feel the DOF is too shallow. And i would prefer the focus to be from lower left to top right, it leads the viewers' eye.

Also, note the WB and the lighting. I feel the lighting you shine onto the keyboards are too bright, resulting in overexposure on the alphabets on the keyboard.
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Originally Posted by Yapster View Post
I feel the DOF is too shallow. And i would prefer the focus to be from lower left to top right, it leads the viewers' eye.

Also, note the WB and the lighting. I feel the lighting you shine onto the keyboards are too bright, resulting in overexposure on the alphabets on the keyboard.
Thanks for you comments. Ya I agree with the part on the focusing should be from lower left to top right...
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