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Walking our separate ways
After all this while, we still couldn't make up our minds on where we were together so let's just walk our separate ways....
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The world is your classroom Last edited by MarkTan89; 17th May 2008 at 08:14 AM. |
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Re: Walking our separate ways
Some how I find the far ends a little too dark...
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Re: Walking our separate ways
composition *first*
the framing here has included unnecessary elements, which add to the already potentially cluttered main idea (based on your title). there seems to be some problem with exposure here , probably due to lighting conditions. |
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Re: Walking our separate ways
ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?
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Re: Walking our separate ways
It looks better now. I find the tonal range lacking....
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Re: Walking our separate ways
but it is still not a strong photograph, don't get me wrong here; i'm not saying that it's horrible. |
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