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    Default Walking our separate ways

    After all this while, we still couldn't make up our minds on where we were together so let's just walk our separate ways....
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    Default Re: Walking our separate ways

    Some how I find the far ends a little too dark...

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    composition *first*

    the framing here has included unnecessary elements, which add to the already potentially cluttered main idea (based on your title).

    there seems to be some problem with exposure here , probably due to lighting conditions.

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    ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?

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    It looks better now. I find the tonal range lacking....

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    Quote Originally Posted by MarkTan89 View Post
    ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?
    better, yes.

    but it is still not a strong photograph, don't get me wrong here; i'm not saying that it's horrible.

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