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Old 15th May 2008   #1
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Default Burj Al Arab,Dubai

shot with a gr1s
a must shoot view when in dubai
scanned and cropped
processed to simulate cross process/lomo feel
colours ok?

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Old 15th May 2008   #2
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Default Re: Burj Al Arab,Dubai

like the colors and grain.
but would have preferred the subject to fill more of the frame, and i would use photoshop to clean up the 'dirty' beach.
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Old 15th May 2008   #3
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I believe there are too much noise.
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Old 15th May 2008   #4
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Good processing, sans the noise.
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Old 17th May 2008   #5
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thanks for the comments guys
the noise actually came from the poor scanning and wasnt done
as a post effect
i'd go to a diff lab next time
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Old 18th May 2008   #6
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Default Re: Burj Al Arab,Dubai

The LH portion has a few distracting elements. There seems to be too much dead space around the main subject as well.
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Old 18th May 2008   #7
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I actually like the effect and colours. If you could fix the tilting horizon.....
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Old 18th May 2008   #8
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Left side the arc/table can be removed.. this make the building stand out in the ruins..
The white board the man holds can be removed as well..
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Old 19th May 2008   #9
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nice feel to the pic.
love the noise actually, adds a different touch to a shoot-to-death scene.
just fix the horizon and maybe brighten it a little.
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Old 20th May 2008   #10
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thanks for all the suggestions and cnc's
here's an orb of life ver of the same pic

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