Getting Ready

diaz2519 · 14th May 2008

C & C wat is wrong wit the picture, My first time shot in low light condition...

calebk · 14th May 2008

There is motion blur and you cut the make up artist off at the shoulder, which is very awkward. Perhaps you'd like to provide a more detailed write-up, in line with critique corner guidelines.

sunboi80 · 14th May 2008

i think crop away the 'face' at the rhs of the pic might help...

somehow i feel the focus is wrong.... it seems to be at the MUA's fingers rather than at the little gal's eye area...

daxdigital · 14th May 2008

Focus is off the intended subject. What's she applying? Makeup, glitter, dental glue?

14th May 2008	#1
diaz2519 Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 53	Getting Ready C & C wat is wrong wit the picture, My first time shot in low light condition...

14th May 2008	#2
calebk Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Clementi Posts: 10,476	Re: Getting Ready There is motion blur and you cut the make up artist off at the shoulder, which is very awkward. Perhaps you'd like to provide a more detailed write-up, in line with critique corner guidelines. __________________ deviantART \| fotologue

14th May 2008	#3
sunboi80 Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: West of SG Posts: 606	Re: Getting Ready i think crop away the 'face' at the rhs of the pic might help... somehow i feel the focus is wrong.... it seems to be at the MUA's fingers rather than at the little gal's eye area... __________________ ;) L-plate Photog: I come, I see, I shoot Last edited by sunboi80; 14th May 2008 at 03:47 PM.

14th May 2008	#4
daxdigital Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 70	Re: Getting Ready Focus is off the intended subject. What's she applying? Makeup, glitter, dental glue?