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    er my sch
    how is it arh
    added contrast only
    18mm F9 ya.
    Last edited by stjustin; 13th May 2008 at 10:20 PM.

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    The spiral staircase to eternal doom.

    Umm.. this is a crit section right? Maybe you can tell us what you would like to be criticised.

    Anyways, the highlights are blown. Too much contrast I think.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Headshotzx View Post
    The spiral staircase to eternal doom.

    Umm.. this is a crit section right? Maybe you can tell us what you would like to be criticised.

    Anyways, the highlights are blown. Too much contrast I think.
    ok ty!!

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    Overexposed highlights. And the stairs lead to... where?

    Feels like the kids would fall off the face of the earth if they reach the bottom... :P

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    Blown highlights, incomplete spiral.

    Please read CC instructions for submission. You should do a brief writeup on why you shot the photo and what you would specifically want critique on.

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    maybe u can make it as b/w? and increase the shadow part?......just a sudden idea...if the center of the spiral is a human and a bit of light is shine on him/her, will it make the whole pic look nicer?

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    composition, and perspective are key here.

    your spiral is all joined together, that spoils it. if you can, go higher, or use a wider lens and lean forward more.

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    Wondering if it would look nicer if the shutter speed was slower to convey a sense of movement around the staircase?

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    Quote Originally Posted by stjustin View Post

    er my sch
    how is it arh
    added contrast only
    18mm F9 ya.
    1. Follow the critique corner rules and include a write-up.

    2. USE ENGLISH, not that horrible text-singlish you are using. Learn to communicate.
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    it's a pity the LHS of the spiral is cut off...
    yeah like wat night8mare said, use a wider lens (if u have) and lean fwd more,
    i would prefer a squarer crop though...
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