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My sch
 er my sch how is it arh added contrast only 18mm F9 ya. Last edited by stjustin; 13th May 2008 at 10:20 PM. |
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Re: My sch
The spiral staircase to eternal doom.
Umm.. this is a crit section right? Maybe you can tell us what you would like to be criticised. Anyways, the highlights are blown. Too much contrast I think.
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14th May 2008
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Re: My sch
Overexposed highlights. And the stairs lead to... where?
Feels like the kids would fall off the face of the earth if they reach the bottom... :P |
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14th May 2008
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Re: My sch
Blown highlights, incomplete spiral.
Please read CC instructions for submission. You should do a brief writeup on why you shot the photo and what you would specifically want critique on. |
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15th May 2008
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Re: My sch
maybe u can make it as b/w? and increase the shadow part?......just a sudden idea...if the center of the spiral is a human and a bit of light is shine on him/her, will it make the whole pic look nicer?
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15th May 2008
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Re: My sch
composition, and perspective are key here.
your spiral is all joined together, that spoils it. if you can, go higher, or use a wider lens and lean forward more. |
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15th May 2008
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Re: My sch
Wondering if it would look nicer if the shutter speed was slower to convey a sense of movement around the staircase?
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Re: My sch
2. USE ENGLISH, not that horrible text-singlish you are using. Learn to communicate.
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16th May 2008
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Re: My sch
it's a pity the LHS of the spiral is cut off...
yeah like wat night8mare said, use a wider lens (if u have) and lean fwd more, i would prefer a squarer crop though... 
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