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Old 11th May 2008   #1
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pls help me to improve this on pic
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TS, pls tell us where and what you wan to have us help u abt. A sentence "pls help me improve on this pic" does not say much on what are you improvement are u seeking.
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Old 11th May 2008   #3
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Originally Posted by nigel84 View Post
TS, pls tell us where and what you wan to have us help u abt. A sentence "pls help me improve on this pic" does not say much on what are you improvement are u seeking.
thks for the reminder , am seeking improvement like colour , composition and how to pp tis pic to make it look better as the pic has not done any pp yet
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Old 12th May 2008   #4
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Originally Posted by noob sniper View Post
thks for the reminder , am seeking improvement like colour , composition and how to pp tis pic to make it look better as the pic has not done any pp yet
perhaps you could share what settings u used to take this picture... on a D300?
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Old 12th May 2008   #5
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To me, sunset pics are all about timing and clouds. For this case, the timing and clouds are all wrong. Try again at a different timing and do try to boost saturation in your PP
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Old 14th May 2008   #6
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Colour's dull, and I agree the timing wasn't right.
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Old 14th May 2008   #7
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You must wait the sun will be on its perfect circle to get a sunset/sunrise effect,
Agree timing isnt right..

Keep on shooting and enjoy
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somehow i feel the sun is a bit too high up, usu i tot they shld be around the horizon?...
correct me if i m wrong...
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thanks for all the input and i will take note of that next time , will keep on trying till i get it right
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the best is u wait till the timing that the sun is round and fall on the horizon...it will create a good mirror image on the sea . the sunset colour is dull..maybe can increase the red colour during pp to make it warm up a bit?...
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