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Join Date: Apr 2008
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this was taken at istana park on the mayday hoildays
taken with a D80 and 18-200 lens the couple was just so loving and adorable. the man was looking for his shoes, and his wife soon joined in . only to realise it was in front of him all the time. C&C please! cheers joel ![]()
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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the top part of the green grass is a bit brighter than the surrounding grasses....Thus it causes distraction.
Very nice pic in terms of composition. Very lovely couple as i can see... Btw, did u also put filter over it? There seem to be a tint...a tobacco tint color...?
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im not sure if the picture shows. anyway, heres the link
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2073/...4f00e746_b.jpg
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Join Date: Apr 2008
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-actually i kinda like the way it is with the green grass on the top brighter. i felt it made the background somewhat more interesting. decided to leave it that way.... what do you people think? ![]() -nope. there wasn't any filter on. most of the work was done on photoshop. just played with the saturation, colour balance and lens correction....the original was rather boring and plain actually
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Jurong West
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i tend to agree that the top bright portion is distracting.. nothing interesting about it as its just the same grass as the foreground, only that its brighter.. or highlighted.
but other than that, i simply love the feel of the picture |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
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thanks!
the focal length 170 f 5.6 exposure 1/125
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either that or you could simply just crop more aggressively. this is a very nice shot, btw. do you have more of them? ![]() |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
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thanks night86mare!
i tried to make it a little better. see how this works... http://www.flickr.com/photos/joelluo/2482117500/
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