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Old 7th May 2008   #1
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Default Tokyo Tower in a different view

Hi all,

been tried many composition to shot the tokyo tower.
I had edit the color tone as well.



Pls C&C.

Still learning.....
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Old 11th May 2008   #2
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I dun see why is this a different view of Tokyo tower, it seems that you had just done some injustice to it. From such a composition it does look like another normal tower that one could find, instead of it being Tokyo Tower. And the left side of the pic is heavily over-exposed. Was that an intented effect? If i were there i would had took this shot with the same angle as yours but shooting the interior instead of the exterior. Which imho would have a much different feel and view to Tokyo tower. Just my humble 2 cents.
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Old 13th May 2008   #3
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it neednt b fanciful...take a look at mine(sry if its hijackin)

http://stjustin.deviantart.com/art/h...white-45264647
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Default Re: Tokyo Tower in a different view

Thanks for the advice....
Note...!!!

Will try again next time....
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Thanks for the advice....
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Will try again next time....
np hahahaha
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what are the little black lies on the top??
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Old 27th May 2008   #7
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what are the little black lies on the top??
I think that is the cable that link to the tower...
Should do some edit to remove the cable lines...
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