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Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 24
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posting for critique for the first time:
![]() please comment on the composition - it's one area I'd really like to improve on, especially since I mainly take photos of kids (babies/toddlers) in candid situations. Here I was trying to capture the contrast of little feet/big feet, thought it's a little tight since I only have the 85mm lens for now. thanks! |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Serangoon North
Posts: 2,050
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Time for BBB virus and get a 50mm.
![]() Too bad the big feet is clipped off. Try shooting landscape with just the two pairs of feet in the frame. No need to show the baby in the background. Also this might work better as a series. |
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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: bukit batok
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i agree with m3lv1nh0 on showing only the feet. no need to draw intestine when drawing people right.
![]() than again, love the yawning.
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New Member
Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 24
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thanks for the comments. lots to learn!
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Serangoon North
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Bro, you can go to the library to look for books on how to photograph children and babies. They will give you tips and suggestions. I find it very useful and it should be very good for you too. Cheers!
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Join Date: Mar 2007
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loved ur kids portraits on flickr. Last edited by orangepekoe; 9th May 2008 at 09:50 AM. |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: serangoon
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thats a lovely shot...
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