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Old 7th May 2008   #1
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Default Big feet, little feet

posting for critique for the first time:



please comment on the composition - it's one area I'd really like to improve on, especially since I mainly take photos of kids (babies/toddlers) in candid situations.

Here I was trying to capture the contrast of little feet/big feet, thought it's a little tight since I only have the 85mm lens for now.

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Old 7th May 2008   #2
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Time for BBB virus and get a 50mm.
Too bad the big feet is clipped off. Try shooting landscape with just the two pairs of feet in the frame. No need to show the baby in the background. Also this might work better as a series.
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Old 7th May 2008   #3
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Default Re: Big feet, little feet

i agree with m3lv1nh0 on showing only the feet. no need to draw intestine when drawing people right.

than again, love the yawning.
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Old 8th May 2008   #4
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thanks for the comments. lots to learn!
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Old 9th May 2008   #5
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Originally Posted by orangepekoe View Post
thanks for the comments. lots to learn!
Bro, you can go to the library to look for books on how to photograph children and babies. They will give you tips and suggestions. I find it very useful and it should be very good for you too. Cheers!
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Old 9th May 2008   #6
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Originally Posted by m3lv1nh0 View Post
Bro, you can go to the library to look for books on how to photograph children and babies. They will give you tips and suggestions. I find it very useful and it should be very good for you too. Cheers!
oh thanks for the tip. will definitely check the lib out. btw, i'm a mom of 3 and those are my kids

loved ur kids portraits on flickr.

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thats a lovely shot...
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