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    This shot was taken at LCK cemetery. Slightly before sunset.


    #Cemetery Life#

    It was already edited using PS.

    Would need some comments regarding the:
    1- composition/framing
    2- color tone
    3- color contrast
    4- Usage of PS

    Any other comments would be very much appreciated.

    First time in photography & first time using PS.

    I hope the picture wld be shown, have included a link too. Cldnt get the picture posted here.....
    I have followed the guide in http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=94574
    & I'm still unable to show the picture
    Last edited by berryfiasco; 4th May 2008 at 09:12 AM. Reason: picture cldnt show
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    it appears that the colour tone and contrast had been pushed too much... Resulting in unnatural colors sumdges in the clouds. Do a HDR with this pic, it would show the magnificent colours of the clouds as well the other elements in the pic. And the clouds were dynamic, which i supposed would work more, if u showed more details of it.
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    never adjust contrast? =)
    no point of focus IMHO.

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    Quote Originally Posted by nigel84 View Post
    it appears that the colour tone and contrast had been pushed too much... Resulting in unnatural colors sumdges in the clouds. Do a HDR with this pic, it would show the magnificent colours of the clouds as well the other elements in the pic. And the clouds were dynamic, which i supposed would work more, if u showed more details of it.
    Oh yeah, if u didn't mention it. i wouldnt knw, esp bot the color tone & the contrast....
    Sorry, but what is HDR?

    Thanks for the comments.
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    Quote Originally Posted by berryfiasco View Post
    Oh yeah, if u didn't mention it. i wouldnt knw, esp bot the color tone & the contrast....
    Sorry, but what is HDR?

    Thanks for the comments.
    hdr - here

    super good hdr user - here

    whatever needs to be said, others have said. i just add on that if you want a photo to be realistic, use hdr, but not too liberally.

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    Hi,

    Another pic awaiting more comments.

    This is a pic of a tulip taken in LCK cemetery.
    It was a color shot but i turn it into B&W & colored the tulip alone.

    Kindly comment on the color tone & contrast.
    The sharpness of the pic.
    Composition & framing too.


    I do hope the pic will be able to appear.
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    Quote Originally Posted by berryfiasco View Post
    Hi,

    Another pic awaiting more comments.

    This is a pic of a tulip taken in LCK cemetery.
    It was a color shot but i turn it into B&W & colored the tulip alone.

    Kindly comment on the color tone & contrast.
    The sharpness of the pic.
    Composition & framing too.


    I do hope the pic will be able to appear.
    You might wanna read through the guidelines for posting in Critique Corner - one photo per week for critique.

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    Quote Originally Posted by calebk View Post
    You might wanna read through the guidelines for posting in Critique Corner - one photo per week for critique.
    oh yeah, i read bot it already.
    But i thought since there isnt any replies or critics regarding my first picture, it should be safe to post a new pic.

    Sorry again.
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    as mentioned, it's 1 picture per week for critique request.

    since there's no interest in continuing the critique of the first picture, thread is hereby closed.

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