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    Default first pic i post : )

    i'd like feedbacks on everything, i just start my photography journey, and i'm sure i still have lots to learn.
    well i took this picture on Water Day, some people were demonstrating in the middle of the city. by the way, he meant "save water for life" haha. i just want to make more people care about water.
    i like this pic's composition, the sky looks nice and all. so i positioned the men at the far right, so the background shows.
    thanks : ))


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    you might want to crop it to a smaller size. and i feel that your watermark is rather big and distracting, might make it smaller and place it somewhere not so distracting. other than that, i quite like the message given by them

    cheers
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    msg written by them was cute and REAL.... but the WB is very off.... think it was at florecent when u took it...very blue....

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    Agree about the watermark.

    The photo also looks a little overexposed. And the white balance/levels...I presume it's there to highlight the 'water' theme? Otherwise a little warmer would be good. ((:

    Cool guys, btw.
    Olympus Now and Forever

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    Default Re: first pic i post : )

    well, the photo seem over exposed too much..and the attracting point inside the pic is not very obvious, and a lot of empty space inside.. maybe a bit of crop and changes in contrast will help..

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    Default Re: first pic i post : )

    Buildings are experiencing "falling" effect. Try to correct it by tilting it back?

    The skyline is tilting to one side, abit uncomfortable.

    The 2 guys in the bg is great. Adds and bring out the 2 dudes in the foreground.
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    Love the man message, too bad he is Man-u fan. try to level the vertical line next time. There is a blue tint on the photo, like u shoot through some windows or WB problem. Would be great if have some water day activities going on in the background Try to frame them a bit lower or higer vertically , so can fit in 1/3rd part, would prefer higher so less sky, more man. my 10cents

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