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    Default Raining day @ CDB



    C&C utmost welcomed

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    Default Re: Raining day @ CDB

    what's the focal point of the phot, may i ask?

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    Default Re: Raining day @ CDB

    Upper left corner of the photo is wash out and quite distracting.

    Lower right corner of the photo has an unwanted grass patch.

    The 2 trees at the foreground doesnt seems to be the subject or the framing elements? I cant find an outstanding subject. Maybe you want to look at the way you take your pictures again? Happy shootnig!
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    Default Re: Raining day @ CDB

    what you want tell people about this photo?
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    Let me help eikin.

    http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273376

    Please do a write up to tell us what you sought to achieve.

    And err, i think it is CBD instead of CDB.

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    Default Re: Raining day @ CDB

    i think u wan to take the rain scene.. perhaps u can focus on the rain puddles on the ground frm a low angle up (in this case some of the buildings will also be in the picture) with the rain puddle as the foreground... mabbe the effect will be nicer? sorry i am visualising... haa
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    Default Re: Raining day @ CDB

    as per guidelines, critique request is limited to only 1 picture per week.

    thread closed.

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