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    Taken at the Chek Jawa information center, where the dog was already asleep for sometime. It just so happened that i spotted the information counter's opening hours and took this shot.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Cr3nk View Post
    Taken at the Chek Jawa information center, where the dog was already asleep for sometime. It just so happened that i spotted the information counter's opening hours and took this shot.



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    haha! good one. picture lack some contrast that's all. The moment is there
    nothing to nitpick

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    Quote Originally Posted by sprintist View Post
    haha! good one. picture lack some contrast that's all. The moment is there
    nothing to nitpick
    Thanks your kind comments. Will take the color contrast into consideration

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    hahah!! i really like this shot! but as previously pointed out just up your contrast and exposure by a tad bit.

    maybe you can bring out the stains on the wall too

    my dua sen

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    Quote Originally Posted by Raied View Post
    hahah!! i really like this shot! but as previously pointed out just up your contrast and exposure by a tad bit.

    maybe you can bring out the stains on the wall too

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    Thank you as well

    My justification for the lack of contrast/exposure was because i was afraid of the stains being distracting. But looking back at it, it does add more feel to the content

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    well well,the dog cud be dead too and not sleeping......but then again, the alert stiff ear of the dog is a dead give away ,that its not dead its does not even have a collar, buts still looks healthy......the dog must be really street smart, to survive more information about the dog can be had from the information desk i think very interesting pic...expsoure can be tinkered for better effect.

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    Nice photo...I fixed your photo slightly according to the rest of your remarks

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    Quote Originally Posted by -ReignOfComputer- View Post
    Fixed the link for you

    It indeed looks more contrasty. Thank you for the example

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    My second rendition on the photo



    I preferred to have left the wall white but with more visible stains.
    Last edited by Cr3nk; 14th April 2008 at 11:07 PM.

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    the second try is too contrasted

    i find that i like it better in bnw - with a slight crop and cloning away of the nparks sign



    good picture with a nice subtle humour to it, i like it

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    Quote Originally Posted by night86mare View Post
    the second try is too contrasted

    i find that i like it better in bnw - with a slight crop and cloning away of the nparks sign



    good picture with a nice subtle humour to it, i like it
    Indeed the photo definitely looks better now. Thank you!

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