By the golden beaches

bighead · 6th April 2008

Comments welcome on composition. Done with photomatix.

Thxs.

wildstallion · 6th April 2008

You have bad haloing around the kayak which would suggest too much strength in photomatix, and the beach is way too saturated and or burned, would suggest desaturating the red channel. Also, the composition is quite weak, too much empty blue sky. Landscape may have been a better choice.

lennyl · 6th April 2008

Originally Posted by wildstallion

Also, the composition is quite weak, too much empty blue sky. Landscape may have been a better choice.

Another thing I'd like to add is that having horizon in (or near) the middle of a photo is seldom a good idea.

bighead · 7th April 2008

edited my mistakes ... thxs people ... more comments welcome

lennyl · 7th April 2008

I like the edited one much better!

6th April 2008	#1
bighead Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 361	By the golden beaches Comments welcome on composition. Done with photomatix. Thxs. __________________ The rule is there are no rules. Last edited by bighead; 6th April 2008 at 03:33 PM.

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wildstallion Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Clementi, Singapore Posts: 2,837	Re: By the golden beaches You have bad haloing around the kayak which would suggest too much strength in photomatix, and the beach is way too saturated and or burned, would suggest desaturating the red channel. Also, the composition is quite weak, too much empty blue sky. Landscape may have been a better choice.

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bighead Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 361	Re: By the golden beaches edited my mistakes ... thxs people ... more comments welcome __________________ The rule is there are no rules.

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lennyl Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Northern California Posts: 1,522	Re: By the golden beaches I like the edited one much better!