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    Default Looking Out...



    Looking out

    What do you see?
    The blue sky
    A green woodland
    The azure lake

    Through life's tribulations
    Everything seems within reach
    ...And yet so far away

    Looking out
    What do I see?

    I see a new scenery
    I see beauty
    I see hope

    Beyond the walls
    Ever so high
    And yet, right at the end
    A new begining...

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    Default Re: Looking Out...

    Presenting the poem with just part of the first line and the last stanza (modified) would have made it a lot more powerful with this picture.

    Looking beyond the wall
    Ever so high
    And yet, right at the end i see...
    A new beginning.

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    Default Re: Looking Out...

    Thanks for the edit.

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