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Old 18th March 2008   #1
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i did a series entitled stereotype for my 'O' level coursework last year. (studio photography with canon eos 350d)
i'm soon gonna be a tp moving images student btw..
i'm very new to photography, and wish to do more streets and candid photography.
any kaki?:P well, c&c appreciated. more next week then.

anorexic- i wanted to show how a bullimic still wanna look good despite being really sick.
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Old 18th March 2008   #2
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its 1 pic a week for critique corner. u need to edit your thread.
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Old 18th March 2008   #3
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its 1 pic a week for critique corner. u need to edit your thread.
done, thanks.
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Old 19th March 2008   #4
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i saw the rest, i think some of the others are better to be honest

in any case, i'm not sure you convey your idea of bumilia/anorexia very distinctively

when i see the picture, first thought is either food fight, or someone puked over her, to be honest

that said, it is not an easy idea to convey, unless you include external elements other than the model alone, or the model is really anorexic, like so

other than that, this is probably a good example why you should not hide limbs, there is a very disconnected feeling about her left torso, like there is a stump there only
i do like the tones and lighting though
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