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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Bedok Reservoir
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i did a series entitled stereotype for my 'O' level coursework last year. (studio photography with canon eos 350d)i'm soon gonna be a tp moving images student btw.. i'm very new to photography, and wish to do more streets and candid photography. any kaki?:P well, c&c appreciated. more next week then. anorexic- i wanted to show how a bullimic still wanna look good despite being really sick. ![]() Last edited by lustlab; 18th March 2008 at 05:26 PM. |
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,318
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its 1 pic a week for critique corner. u need to edit your thread.
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Bedok Reservoir
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done, thanks.
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: in your mind
Posts: 19,261
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i saw the rest, i think some of the others are better to be honest
in any case, i'm not sure you convey your idea of bumilia/anorexia very distinctively when i see the picture, first thought is either food fight, or someone puked over her, to be honest that said, it is not an easy idea to convey, unless you include external elements other than the model alone, or the model is really anorexic, like so other than that, this is probably a good example why you should not hide limbs, there is a very disconnected feeling about her left torso, like there is a stump there only i do like the tones and lighting though |
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