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Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 9
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hey guy, need some opinion and advice. This photo taken with D40X while my two nieces were playing.
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Serangoon North
Posts: 2,044
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Looks more like a snapshot to me.
The background is messy with the TV and fan. Showing the subject's armpit is not very flattering even if its a kid. I know it hard but try to get the kids to look at you. Capture the innocence of a child thru their eyes. If possible, go outdoor where the natural light is great for shooting fast moving kids. The background would be nicer too. |
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 541
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u captured the moment faithfully.
this shot wun win any competition. but cherish it. i am sure years later, they will look at it w fond memories. perhaps, such is the soul of photography. |
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Bishan
Posts: 968
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 9
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Thanks for e comment
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New Member
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 37
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happy children, you captured the moment indeed. |
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: East of Singapore
Posts: 607
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I would predict that you use direct pop-up flash?
This caused the background to be dark while subject (the kids) to be bright & reflective. Can try to invest on a hot shoe flash (SB-600 perhaps) & bounce the flash to the ceiling to have soft balanced lightings... It will give you a totally different shot... PS: Flash can make your shot become outstanding but it can also destroy your shot... So, use wisely... Happy photographing...
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