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Old 15th March 2008   #1
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Default Tree Top Walk

Wanted to test out "zoomed" close-up shots to reduce the DOF of a living subject.

Both shots are taken hand-held, in close proximity using just a FZ50 w/UV Len.

Camera Make: Panasonic
Camera Model: DMC-FZ50
Image Date: 2008:01:19 10:40:03
Flash Used: No
Focal Length: 72.9mm (35mm equivalent: 364mm)
Exposure Time: 0.0080 s (1/125)
Aperture: f/4.0
ISO equiv: 100
Exposure Bias: 0.33
White Balance: Manual
Light Source: Fine Weather
Metering Mode: Matrix
Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)





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Originally Posted by Anson View Post
Wanted to test out "zoomed" close-up shots to reduce the DOF of a living subject.

Both shots are taken hand-held, in close proximity using just a FZ50 w/UV Len.

Details can be found in the embedded EXIF info
when you request for critique, it's better for you to put up the relevant information instead of asking others to go uncover them.

since this is a technical test shot, thread will be moved.
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overexpose. try photoshop
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Originally Posted by untitled-ego View Post
overexpose. try photoshop
Thanks for the suggestion, but I chose (beside resizing it to fit my PDA) not to use any PI ( PhotoImpact ) on this photo to test my FZ50...
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To me, the colour seemed a bit bland (though you mentioned you are avoiding any post-processing?)

Composition wise, its too centered. The black object in the background sticking out from the head is also rather distracting.
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To me, the colour seemed a bit bland (though you mentioned you are avoiding any post-processing?)

Composition wise, its too centered. The black object in the background sticking out from the head is also rather distracting.
Thanks for your comments, the black object on the back is one of the "wire" that keeps the bridge from falling.
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