Fire

fantasium · 10th March 2008

Here is a photo taken at my recent D&D.. This is one of the performance.. I dunno what can i name this photo.. Can't really think a name for it.. Wanted to capture the fire spitting lady behind and the fire swallowing friend as the foreground.. C&C welcome and any comments to improve are welcome.. As i am a newbie starting to learn photography.. Thanks!!

sherchoo · 11th March 2008

The bottom could be cropped off a little.

dathorax · 11th March 2008

Hrmm i think the two people in the foreground is sort of distracting viewers away from the subject, which is in the background. I feel that by cropping away the bottom and left portion of the picture u might be able to make the subject more prominent... Juz my two cents

fantasium · 11th March 2008

ok.. will take note.. thanks

10th March 2008	#1
fantasium Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 103	Fire Here is a photo taken at my recent D&D.. This is one of the performance.. I dunno what can i name this photo.. Can't really think a name for it.. Wanted to capture the fire spitting lady behind and the fire swallowing friend as the foreground.. C&C welcome and any comments to improve are welcome.. As i am a newbie starting to learn photography.. Thanks!!

11th March 2008	#2
sherchoo Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Bukit Panjang Posts: 502	Re: Fire The bottom could be cropped off a little. __________________ \|SonyA700\|T180mmf3.5\|M50mmf1.7\|M70-210mmf4\|S17-35mmf2.8-4\|S30mmf1.4\|T17-50mmf2.8\|T90mmf2.8\|M5600hsd\|

11th March 2008	#3
dathorax New Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 9	Re: Fire Hrmm i think the two people in the foreground is sort of distracting viewers away from the subject, which is in the background. I feel that by cropping away the bottom and left portion of the picture u might be able to make the subject more prominent... Juz my two cents

11th March 2008	#4
fantasium Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 103	Re: Fire ok.. will take note.. thanks