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    Smile Vivid- a nature depiction

    so i woke up from chalet in Changi.
    Walked along the revamped coastal sides and thought i'll try macro shots after about 3 years using this Canon Powershot A520 and finally , I can be a little proud of my results. Usually I'll be embarrased to post it here. However, some feedbacks on ways to improve would be much appreciated.





    thanks guys!
    Last edited by eikin; 8th March 2008 at 10:05 PM. Reason: remove extra images

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    Default Re: Vivid- a nature depiction

    please take note of the guidelines before posting. 1 picture per week for critique request, and include a proper short writeup for the picture. http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273376

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    Default Re: Vivid- a nature depiction

    Quote Originally Posted by velasco View Post
    so i woke up from chalet in Changi.
    Walked along the revamped coastal sides and thought i'll try macro shots after about 3 years using this Canon Powershot A520 and finally , I can be a little proud of my results. Usually I'll be embarrased to post it here. However, some feedbacks on ways to improve would be much appreciated.





    thanks guys!
    hmmm not much of comments here but the shot is blur. if you shot this in the open try letting your background be the sky or something which isn't really distracting and is nice to look at. =)
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    it would be easier to give critique if the ts would give a description of what he intends to express with the shot, what ideas

    that said, the color here is very disorientating, i personally think it would work better in b&w

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