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    Default walls

    This world is full of darkness but there is still a way for escape.


    Taken at punggol LRT station
    17mm, ISO 400, 0.3 sec exp.
    Last edited by MarkTan89; 6th March 2008 at 12:12 AM.

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    Default Re: walls

    you'll need to remove the last few characters that come after the .jpg when you link an image.

    also, please include a short writeup for your picture as per guidelines http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273376

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    Default Re: walls

    thanks for the help, finally could paste my image here.

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    good pic!

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    Default Re: walls

    Quote Originally Posted by tionghan View Post
    good pic!
    Please read the guidelines for giving critique here on Critique Corner. A simple comment like "good pic" or "bad pic" won't do.

    TS, nice use of leading lines to draw the viewer's eye in. I also like your exposure choice - it is close to perfect IMHO. Bottom corners are nicely shrouded in shadow, while there is good tonal range on the sides and in the center foreground.

    Just one minor nitpick - there is a thin white horizontal line on the left of the frame. It's very fine, but stands out against the total black in that area. Perhaps it can be burned out?

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    Default Re: walls

    Thank you for all the replies. Will take note of such distractions in the picture next time

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