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walls
This world is full of darkness but there is still a way for escape.
 Taken at punggol LRT station 17mm, ISO 400, 0.3 sec exp.
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The world is your classroom Last edited by MarkTan89; 6th March 2008 at 12:12 AM. |
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Re: walls
you'll need to remove the last few characters that come after the .jpg when you link an image.
also, please include a short writeup for your picture as per guidelines http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273376
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Re: walls
thanks for the help, finally could paste my image here.
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Re: walls
good pic!
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Re: walls
TS, nice use of leading lines to draw the viewer's eye in. I also like your exposure choice - it is close to perfect IMHO. Bottom corners are nicely shrouded in shadow, while there is good tonal range on the sides and in the center foreground. Just one minor nitpick - there is a thin white horizontal line on the left of the frame. It's very fine, but stands out against the total black in that area. Perhaps it can be burned out? |
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Re: walls
Thank you for all the replies. Will take note of such distractions in the picture next time
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