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Thread: Sunrise @ Pasir Ris

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    Default Sunrise @ Pasir Ris

    Just thought of sharing some pics with guys n gals

    Comments always warmly welcomed.


    Hmm.. i think more "intimacy" among the couple would be better?


    Err.. th branches a bit distracting rite?

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    very nice , colorful and romantic

    for the 1st shot , would prefer to get the couple to go closer to each other and stand more to the left side and do not block the sun ..

    just my 2 cents worth
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    The body language of the guy is not natural and the I feel that they fill too much of the picture. The branches are also rather distracting. All in all, the picture has the feeling of being "staged", it could work well for a print ad.

    For the second picture, the colours are quite nice but the framing could be just a bit tighter.

    Regards.

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    haha yup.. indeed it was posed. That's why the guy looks very stiff.
    Totally agree with megaweb and wallpaper... will try harder

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    Perhaps a wider angle on the first shot would be better, looks a bit too tight here. Nice colors!

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    any "wider" there'll be two big distrating mangrove trees on the left and right. but neverthless it is indeed too tight.

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