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This was taken during CNY period with my 50mm at f1.8.
Do comment in terms of composition on how this can be improved, thanks! ![]()
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I think the camera got to go lower in terms of its angle. Afterall its a cute little kid and its impt to catch its eyes i believe. Go up close too, its alittle too wide at this range. Its quite lacking of a subject in this picture, the boy's glance doesn't make up for the lack of it.
Maybe just a framing of the boy looking and him holding the mother's hand can convey the message better. A picture of a curious boy? just my simple suggestions ![]() |
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a lower angle, so that the kid doesn't look so pet-like.. would be more flattering for your subject
eye contact is not absolutely necessary, but when there is no eye contact the subject's pose has to be interesting.. here i do not find it as such perhaps going closer (not very easy if you do not know the kid/parent, i know) might be better too, can throw the background out of focus more, right now the bokeh is not enough and it is still quite distracting. |
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Thanks for all your comments. Agree that getting lower will certainly improve the pic. Perhaps should have chosen a better background as well...
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it will be nicer if crop until only left the child and the hand, blur the background if you do photoshop
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You mean like that?
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