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Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 15
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![]() A Morning scene at Podicherry, India beach side..usually a lots of people will come here for morning walking near beach side.. Morning Exercises good for health but waking up in early morning is very tough from wonderful sleep ![]() Same story from this gentlemen..can't able to control his sleep.. Come on man its time for your Exercises ![]() ******************************** Waiting for your comments ![]() |
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 541
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a very simple and neat shot.
looks good |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 423
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More suitable as the old man is looking to to right and so is the body language of the young man. Just man 2 cents. ![]() picture look clean and nice. |
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: in your mind
Posts: 19,382
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clean, and well done, with a vague sense of humour
well seen. nothing much to fault here, even the bottom of the frame having the pavement pattern, i like it ![]() |
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Bishan
Posts: 968
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cute picture..
just a gripe i have.. not sure if it's just me.. the fact that the old man's is looking to his left (right of picture) i'd prefer the shot to shift towards the left "thirds" to give the old man more space to "look at".. or if the old man is portrayed to be looking at the sleeping guy.. then even positioning it at centre can work also (crop to portrait).. the left of the frame is like a bit dull for now.. |
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