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27th February 2008
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Join Date: Jan 2008
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indigenous Malaysian Boy
 Took this shot while in Perak, indigenous village...lovely people... Love to hear comments on how to improve shots like these... |
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Re: indigenous Malaysian Boy
Thanks..i'll improve on the cropping... |
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27th February 2008
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Serangoon North
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Re: indigenous Malaysian Boy
Either have a closer crop of the boy or include his whole body in the frame. Now it's just not here not there. Also check your white balance, seems to be on the red side. It's a great subject to shoot, hopefully there's more.
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27th February 2008
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Join Date: Apr 2005
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Re: indigenous Malaysian Boy
just remember taking picture is painting with light..so light is always an element..when the object is under shade without much light source..hard to be worth taking.
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27th February 2008
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: west
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Re: indigenous Malaysian Boy
looks a bit underexposed, maybe a fill flash might have done the trick...
as for the boy, he a great subject with a great smile! but his legs were cut off... if his legs were in, it would have been much more complete... |
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27th February 2008
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 8,270
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Re: indigenous Malaysian Boy
Very very "everyday holiday photo" kinda shot. Lighting is off, composition is off, WB is off.
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28th February 2008
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Re: indigenous Malaysian Boy
Prefer the boy eye looking at your direction.
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