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    Default Food for thought



    This is a shoot for my uni's campus newspaper food column. C&C are welcome.
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    Default Re: Food for thought

    1) the white spots!
    2) mint leaf can look fresher (w/o the black spots)
    3) centre piece, in front, bottom right shadow, results in a loss of edge.
    4) w/b & color tone, a little warm? (sorry using an uncalibrated screen now.. might be a wrong opinion)
    5) need to show all 4 pieces or shoot them in 4's? i dunno i might like shooting one single piece alone, i.e the nicer looking one, the centre/front piece

    just my little opinions, i'm no expert.
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    Nice. But the black background does not go well with the black plate. perhaps change another plate?

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    Default Re: Food for thought

    Oh the white spots are some powderish stuff that is sprinkled on the dessert.
    I agree definitely the mint leaf can look fresher.
    Looks ok on my comp
    Its a food column pic for my uni's campus newspaper, so yeah... did not really do much styling on the food. They are as it is presented by the chef.

    It actually not a black background but a brown wooden table outside the cafe in the evening (7pm). It was relatively dark so yeah, some areas were dark.

    Thanks all for the comments.
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