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Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 244
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It was a hot and lusty night in lorong 18........
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Raffles Place
Posts: 1,694
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Pacman's Corner
Posts: 396
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Nice work!
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Member/Tangshooter
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Jurong West
Posts: 6,358
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pretty nice concept
like it! |
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: New York City
Posts: 2,784
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nice exposure and setting. But Geisha would be a better title?
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: singapore
Posts: 1,707
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Hot? Lusty? Geylang Lorong 18? Really? Where....
A gentle pose and mesmerizing stockings, but a better, interesting background and supporting prop(s) would serve your point better. This is simply a woman (fair guess) in stockings. A fairly forgettable picture mainly due to a lack of motive/story. |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 1,506
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Nice but it doesnt show any hint that this is geylang.
Just curious, why the empty space on the right? Why not a verticle frame? |
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 4,153
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Sometimes, deliberate off-set of subject/space like in this picture can be beneficial esp for adding a headline etc...
With a layout like that, it could be a front top half_-page of LIFE! headlined: China Invasion at Geylang What are the odds of survival? But I agree, replacing the BG with a road-textured one would have added a lot of realism to the shot. Last edited by Dream Merchant; 26th February 2008 at 02:35 AM. |
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Member
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: in front of my macbook pro
Posts: 139
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Love the photo - very nicely composed and great lighting. Thanks for sharing.
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Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: in your mind
Posts: 19,382
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very graphic, i like
frankly, titling is up to the artist i'm sure if van gogh had titled his sunflowers BIG YELLOW SUNRISES no one would be complaining, all of them would be calling it BIG YELLOW SUNRISES, if you catch my drift |
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 244
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thanks guys for both the feedback and compliments. this shot came about during a studio shoot in geylang last week. it was getting pretty boring, with everybody taking the usual facial shots and I didnt want to do more of the same
but the vibrant color mix continued to fascinate me. i tried to capture the vibrance without having to show a face and yet get some strong message across ..... thus this shot. |
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 244
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 124
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Love the pic. Very neat and the colours are sharp.
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Amazon Forest
Posts: 1,623
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The photo got my attention although a matching background would be better.How about an outing to Geylang? But leave your digital guns at home ![]()
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