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24th February 2008
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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: northeast
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Destroy
took this interesting vandalism in one of the older tunnels of singapore.
 Exposure: 0.033 sec (1/30) Aperture: f/2.8 Focal Length: 108 mm ISO Speed: 200 how does you feel about the photo. composition? thanks |
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24th February 2008
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: in your mind
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Re: Destroy
composition is lack lustre, there is no clear idea conveyed, nor is there any "life" in the photo, there is no interaction of elements
it is, to me, just a plain picture of graffiti on the wall. is there anything you wish to convey, or is it just a record documentary-style shot? what you intend to achieve is just as important as the aesthetic value of the photo, if you ask me. here, the latter is literally non-existant. |
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25th February 2008
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Woodlands
Posts: 149
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Re: Destroy
Feel like just a snapshot. too much clear space on the bottom left of the pic.
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