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Join Date: Nov 2005
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Hi guys,
I wanted to try some zoom-creep photography and tried capturing the Esplanade. What do you guys think? Does it work for you? Only PS work done was to add the border and text. This was an 8-second exposure. ![]()
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Join Date: Oct 2007
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i like it
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Join Date: Jan 2008
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the picture is nice as it is
i hope you won't a comment from a newbie like me.
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![]() Hmm, yes, I could give that a try too.
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the place is perfect, but your photo...
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Join Date: Sep 2007
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Your timing is a bit fast. try slower one.
I also perfer to see it clearly in the center. |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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it'll look better for me if i could make out the esplanade and the below (are they cars?) more clearly..as previous posters said, open the shutter longer before zooming.
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Join Date: May 2007
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i believe the photo isn't straight.
just my 2 cents worth. |
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Join Date: Jul 2007
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i feel that the subject is not appropriate for this "style" of photography.. or rather.. the overall setting..
there seems to be too many lights around the esplanade for this one.. which makes the picture really messy after your long exposure + zoom.. then of course the problem with tilt too.. |
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Thanks for all the feedback! It looked fantastic printed out.
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I think it looks good. However an improvement in my opinion is that you crop out the sky and etc., leaving the focus on the multiple exposures of the lights of the Esplanade. It will give a new perspective which I find more interesting.
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Very interesting shot! I don't think much can be done to the horizon cause the bridge is not "straight in that sense...
But the left zig zag lines are very distracting... draws my attention away from the main focus which is the durian... Maybe you can try another location which give more attention to the esplanade instead. Or start zooming from half of the full tele length?
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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Yupyup. Will try. I have a good one of the Merlion too actually. I'll try posting that one up and see what you guys think
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