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15th February 2008
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Choa Chu Kang
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HDB
Posting this for next week. Because next week will not be in SG but Melbourne. Please do give ur advises on this shot.
I shot with the mly lady on the paveway to show the distance she walk to get home. A lonely process. 
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Re: HDB
Colour is bland and branches in foreground are a distraction. Big chunk of the left foreground is underexposed. The lady is not obvious at first glance so your idea is kinda lost.
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Re: HDB
Thanks for ur reply. Still a very newbie in photography. ur comments helps alot. What about the overall picture? Is it a good picture based on elements? I still getting used to the settings =}
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Re: HDB
the flats should be the main focus of the picture but from what i can see the right side of the branches seems to be focused.
try a better shot next time. all the best!
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